ESSAYS

A for Alfi was my clear favorite out of the three essays.  I thought the language in the essay made the it flow very well.  The essay did not have as many big words as the others allowing the essay to run more smoothly.  The Intro and Thesis were as clear as water in the Caribbean.   I enjoyed how he put the "good list" "bad list" as his way to reflect back to his thesis. which helped make everything more clear.   The body paragraphs also reflected constantly to the thesis which i thought made the essay much easier to follow.  Also i really liked the evidence to support his claim and did not disagree once with anything through out the essay.