Essay

After writing my essay I should read a couple more times incase of stupid grammatical errors such as comma splices, misspelling and awkward sentences.  Also I should be more aware of the rules of the format such as knowing which words to italicize.  Secondly I need to work on my body paragraphs reflecting on exactly what my thesis says and not shift and try to focus on my main point.  Also maybe next time in my introduction i should not be so direct with my main point as directly pointing out how Jane Austen wants us to judge while Hurston does not.